tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6294216781256377195.post6593481172385996233..comments2023-10-06T05:37:22.993-07:00Comments on The Wilderness Within: A Subtle, Surreal Flash Fiction Story: "Tumbleweeds." John Claude Smithhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09842546931524427280noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6294216781256377195.post-3384713258384959532014-05-15T19:35:30.424-07:002014-05-15T19:35:30.424-07:00Oh, but that's the point, Ingrid, haha. That e...Oh, but that's the point, Ingrid, haha. That ending, surreal...it's supposed to be 'weird,' as in, again, surreal. The tumbleweed with his voice; the tumbleweeds heading toward the door...some kind of transference has transpired. Something out of the norm, not of this plane. Something really friggin'...weird. Thanks for your feedback! Always appreciated! <br />John Claude Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09842546931524427280noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6294216781256377195.post-81847510402204493842014-05-15T16:55:14.907-07:002014-05-15T16:55:14.907-07:00I'm in awe of your eloquence, my friend, in to...I'm in awe of your eloquence, my friend, in total awe. As for cringe factor, you had me until the appearance of the tumbleweed with Darrin's voice...sorry.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13329145765484713789noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6294216781256377195.post-59548569219293248152014-05-15T14:11:46.120-07:002014-05-15T14:11:46.120-07:00Thanks much, Mimi! Glad you enjoyed it. You know ...Thanks much, Mimi! Glad you enjoyed it. You know how some early material can inspiring a cringe and worse? Well, this one doesn't, heheh... <br />:-)John Claude Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09842546931524427280noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6294216781256377195.post-5070780209594689202014-05-15T12:29:10.833-07:002014-05-15T12:29:10.833-07:00this is goooodthis is goooodMimiandMonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15601320448285569775noreply@blogger.com