Thursday, July 3, 2025

Let's Step "Into The Void" with My Black Sabbath Poem

 With the final performance for the original line-up of Black Sabbath imminent, I was reminded I'd written a poem a couple years ago as a response to their song, "Into The Void." I remember reading the lyrics for the song and thinking, "there's a story here," but when I went to write the story, it let me know the proper presentation was as a poem. 

Anyway, reread the lyrics for the song and bounce those off the bleak SF vibe (which is also quite timely, even as I wrote the poem in response to lyrics written fifty or so years ago) I've written here. 

Enjoy! 


Into The Void 

By John Claude Smith (of course!)

 

 

Colossal ships soar into the vast black sea of night                          

 

A baker’s dozen Drakkar dragons spitting flames

as they tear a hole into the ebony sky wide as the devil’s smile

Hurling toward the vast unknown

as dictated by Newton’s third law of motion

     along with undetected distortions within the field of quantum physics   

while abandoning legions deemed unworthy

Noses raised in allegiance with human avarice

     (We pledge allegiance to the flag of the United States of Depravity)

a perception one-sided, the absence of empathy reveals

the sluggish heartbeat of the atavistic adjudicators.

 

Time is the engine of space

 

One finally utilized in interstellar travel

(though still without pure understanding)

The first wave stops second hands on the Great Eternal Clock

The deception lingers unconfirmed as the ships sail onward

Galaxies surrender to their trespass

Universes succumb to the lazy pull

of wave after wave crashing shorebound

upon the abandoned beaches of Infinity

where stars blink into nonexistence

while the wasteland reconstitutes

as one with what they thought they left behind

disgusted by those deemed subhuman

below them while their knees bend

to capitalism and insatiable appetites

bound to unwavering greed

that fuels their ill celebrated escape

 

But to what true purpose?

 

Those left behind flourish without

the cruel components of class of which to bow

no god but Mother Earth deemed worthy

While those who race to the stars

watch as a single second eventually passes

swallowed after months of mastication

     Time now a snail’s pace consideration…

What looms is the bleakest outcome ever imagined

bellies never filled, dreams whittled to dust

their just reward: existence by rote

 

the     empty      embrace      of      immortality

 

all goals muffled in the ears of Hope

the song that arises a harrowing cry to anguish

breath and dreams devoured as they drift forever

 

Into The Void.


And here's a photo of the boys. ;-)